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MrsGrizzley
 
Posts : 78
Join date : 2015-03-25
Age : 49
| | Subject: Re: Return to Innocence AU Wed Dec 20, 2017 11:40 pm | |
| Okay... I had to go forward and back a couple times because of bad links and draft pages, but I read through Return to Innocence and... daaaaaaaaaaaaaamn... that's a HELL of a lot of Recognitions. How many characters did you end up creating anyway? And... that many lives brought back at once? I dunno if there would even be Recognitions that soon after all those lives regained.
I admit, it's kinda funny for me to talk about it because I have characters who do kinda the same sort of thing in my fics. Just from a different methodology and not quite so... immediately.
I like the potential in the story, though, and I really like the artwork. You're doing AWESOME! Go you!! | |
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Sadachbia
 
Posts : 161
Join date : 2015-06-16
Age : 41
Location : The Sea of Grass
| | Subject: Re: Return to Innocence AU Thu Dec 21, 2017 2:17 am | |
| Thanks!  And I figure anytime a bunch of elves meet and different gene pools mix, it's like stardust in colliding galaxies: there's gonna be a bunch of recombination. ^_~ | |
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MrsGrizzley
Posts : 78
Join date : 2015-03-25
Age : 49
| | Subject: Re: Return to Innocence AU Thu Dec 21, 2017 4:37 am | |
| That... is a very good point. And with having been so recently dead and without the ability to reproduce their unique genetic structures... that might actually tilt the odds in favor of finding a compatible partner as quickly as possible...
I've gotten to the point where I err on the line of *fewer* Recognitions and pregnancies because it lowers the burden of juggling quite so many characters since each baby is a character in their own right, but that's a matter of personal preference. You definitely have my curiosity and damnit, I need to get back to writing HalfElven. | |
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jaRf
Posts : 563
Join date : 2015-04-07
| | Subject: Re: Return to Innocence AU Thu Dec 21, 2017 6:13 am | |
| I'd like to read it in one rush when it's finished.  | |
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manga
Posts : 928
Join date : 2015-03-25
| | Subject: Re: Return to Innocence AU Thu Dec 21, 2017 3:09 pm | |
| I was never a fan of the limited recognition due to perceived carrying capacity of an area idea anyway. When you've got Galaxy-spanning shape-shifters there is no carrying capacity to worry about. Not only does nature just not work that way but if things are getting a little tight on land just shape-shift yourself into an underwater dwelling species. Or even something that can live in the vacuum of space and get it energy and food from solar emissions. C'mon, think big! | |
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Sadachbia
Posts : 161
Join date : 2015-06-16
Age : 41
Location : The Sea of Grass
| | Subject: Re: Return to Innocence AU Thu Dec 28, 2017 12:37 pm | |
| - Quote :
- I've gotten to the point where I err on the line of *fewer* Recognitions and pregnancies because it lowers the burden of juggling quite so many characters since each baby is a character in their own right, but that's a matter of personal preference.
*glances at list of hundreds of named children, and sweats* Yeah I'm basically playing The Sims with elves at this point… | |
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Sadachbia
Posts : 161
Join date : 2015-06-16
Age : 41
Location : The Sea of Grass
| | Subject: Re: Return to Innocence AU Thu Dec 28, 2017 12:58 pm | |
| One of these days, I'm going to go through and label all the characters that aren't immediately recognisable, then post that on Tumblr or something as a guide… in other words, basically the opposite of what Elfmom does (she's about the opposite of OCD lol) | |
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Sadachbia
Posts : 161
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Age : 41
Location : The Sea of Grass
| | Subject: Re: Return to Innocence AU Fri Dec 29, 2017 5:21 pm | |
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manga
Posts : 928
Join date : 2015-03-25
| | Subject: Re: Return to Innocence AU Fri Dec 29, 2017 9:29 pm | |
| That is a lot of names and character designs! Well done! Why do some of them have three names instead of a tribal designation? | |
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Sadachbia
Posts : 161
Join date : 2015-06-16
Age : 41
Location : The Sea of Grass
| | Subject: Re: Return to Innocence AU Sat Dec 30, 2017 4:26 am | |
| Whoops, that redhead lady talking to Savah alongside Aerth should be labeled as "Behlen", not "Behtia". Got some wires crossed. I'll fix it and add more names. | |
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Shadowpath
 
Posts : 1375
Join date : 2015-11-07
Age : 37
Location : That really dull place.
| | Subject: Re: Return to Innocence AU Sat Dec 30, 2017 3:34 pm | |
| Ah, it was Hestawai beside Shenshen!
Who's the person on Longbranch's left? ___________________________________________________  'We're all broken, in different ways, in varying degrees.'
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Sadachbia
Posts : 161
Join date : 2015-06-16
Age : 41
Location : The Sea of Grass
| | Subject: Re: Return to Innocence AU Sat Dec 30, 2017 6:39 pm | |
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Shadowpath
Posts : 1375
Join date : 2015-11-07
Age : 37
Location : That really dull place.
| | Subject: Re: Return to Innocence AU Sat Dec 30, 2017 6:50 pm | |
| Brownberry, of course! I mistook hairdo as a chieflock. ___________________________________________________ 'We're all broken, in different ways, in varying degrees.'
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Sadachbia
Posts : 161
Join date : 2015-06-16
Age : 41
Location : The Sea of Grass
| | Subject: Re: Return to Innocence AU Sun Dec 31, 2017 4:28 am | |
| How did I manage to make Hathwisa's label text transparent in the updated page? o_O | |
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Sadachbia
Posts : 161
Join date : 2015-06-16
Age : 41
Location : The Sea of Grass
| | Subject: Re: Return to Innocence AU Mon Jan 01, 2018 6:52 pm | |
| I FINISHED THE LAST 2 PAGES LAST NIGHT AND POSTED THEM TODAY. IT ONLY TOOK ME 6 YEARS
edit: apparently this forum cannot recognise emoji symbols in text and just blanks out the entire post if you include them… | |
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Kaza999
Posts : 161
Join date : 2015-05-31
| | Subject: Re: Return to Innocence AU Fri Jan 05, 2018 12:43 am | |
| aw i gotta do an archive binge now!
(ok but my favorite note is 'kureel, not rezzed because he died an asshole.' the new designs and elves are fun, but that made me laugh) | |
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Sadachbia
Posts : 161
Join date : 2015-06-16
Age : 41
Location : The Sea of Grass
| | Subject: Re: Return to Innocence AU Tue Mar 06, 2018 5:00 pm | |
| Moar arts!
https://amethystsadachbia.deviantart.com/art/Reunited-734211679
https://amethystsadachbia.deviantart.com/art/A-New-Quest-Awaits-734213083 | |
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Embala
Posts : 16971
Join date : 2012-06-24
Age : 64
Location : Germany
| | Subject: Re: Return to Innocence AU Tue Mar 06, 2018 5:57 pm | |
| Cutter and Leetah look like they are up for a prank! *chuckles* I just love Woodhue and Clearbrook.  I figure this is their first child? ___________________________________________________  Indem du etwas tust, das dir oder jemand anderem gefällt, erschaffst du bereits einen Wert. | |
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manga
Posts : 928
Join date : 2015-03-25
| | Subject: Re: Return to Innocence AU Tue Mar 06, 2018 7:10 pm | |
| Nope, their third. This is a reincarnated Woodhue, returned to life with the rest of the unjustly slain characters in this AU. | |
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Embala
Posts : 16971
Join date : 2012-06-24
Age : 64
Location : Germany
| | Subject: Re: Return to Innocence AU Tue Mar 06, 2018 7:23 pm | |
| ___________________________________________________ Indem du etwas tust, das dir oder jemand anderem gefällt, erschaffst du bereits einen Wert. | |
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Sadachbia
Posts : 161
Join date : 2015-06-16
Age : 41
Location : The Sea of Grass
| | Subject: Re: Return to Innocence AU Tue Mar 06, 2018 8:36 pm | |
| Yep, third! ^_^ I have some old doodles of her, though none finished. They name her Eagle. | |
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Sadachbia
Posts : 161
Join date : 2015-06-16
Age : 41
Location : The Sea of Grass
| | Subject: Re: Return to Innocence AU Sun Mar 18, 2018 3:47 am | |
| Aight, home from my work week and hoping to sketch out a chapter of CotW over the weekend! (My work week is Tues–Sat, so Sunday/Monday are my weekend.) Been doing some quick-and-dirty portraits while I binge on Netflix Marvel shows. https://amethystsadachbia.deviantart.com/art/Raenafel-speed-art-735784173 https://amethystsadachbia.deviantart.com/art/Sleia-speed-art-735785264 https://amethystsadachbia.deviantart.com/art/Ahdri-speed-art-735785887 https://amethystsadachbia.deviantart.com/art/Adya-speed-art-736036193 https://amethystsadachbia.deviantart.com/art/Maron-speed-art-736036634 https://amethystsadachbia.deviantart.com/art/Clearbrook-speed-art-735212305 https://amethystsadachbia.deviantart.com/art/Ahnshen-speed-art-735683349 https://amethystsadachbia.deviantart.com/art/Heartwood-speed-art-735212656 (Yep, the original Black Mermaid WaveDancers will be showing up in this universe So will the newer WaveDancers that made it into canon.) | |
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Embala
Posts : 16971
Join date : 2012-06-24
Age : 64
Location : Germany
| | Subject: Re: Return to Innocence AU Sun Mar 18, 2018 4:46 am | |
| I love your portraits! YAY for Original Wavedancers and neglected Ahnshen. ___________________________________________________ Indem du etwas tust, das dir oder jemand anderem gefällt, erschaffst du bereits einen Wert. | |
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Sadachbia
Posts : 161
Join date : 2015-06-16
Age : 41
Location : The Sea of Grass
| | Subject: Re: Return to Innocence AU Wed Mar 28, 2018 11:55 pm | |
| Uploading the first drafts of chapter 4 now | |
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Sadachbia
Posts : 161
Join date : 2015-06-16
Age : 41
Location : The Sea of Grass
| | Subject: Re: Return to Innocence AU Fri Mar 30, 2018 1:20 pm | |
| https://amethystsadachbia.deviantart.com/art/Children-of-the-World-IV-p01-first-draft-737738219 | |
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