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Prayer
Posts : 1015 Join date : 2016-04-28 Age : 36 Location : Germany
| Subject: Re: ~ Poetry - "Worlds change when eyes meet" ~ Sat Jun 23, 2018 11:23 am | |
| Golden Flower (Ahdri's Song for Ruffel) Dancing the Lover's Dance Like no other -- Happiness was your brother; Joy was your sister, it's true: Oh, Ruffel! Nobody else like you -- Your mere smile like a kiss, Forever and truly missed; Your touch was like an embrace, Eternally the sun you'll chase For you were warmth like the sun, Yet your spirit journey has now begun Yes, you were a Desert's Child Your heart knew no darkness nor night Oh Ruffel! Nobody else like you -- A golden flower Of love and sweetness, Of smiles and good times Like you. | |
| | | PCoquelin
Posts : 1901 Join date : 2012-07-14 Age : 56 Location : St-Michel/Orge - France
| Subject: Re: ~ Poetry - "Worlds change when eyes meet" ~ Sat Jun 23, 2018 12:29 pm | |
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Posts : 1015 Join date : 2016-04-28 Age : 36 Location : Germany
| Subject: Re: ~ Poetry - "Worlds change when eyes meet" ~ Sun Jun 24, 2018 5:01 am | |
| Thank you so much, PC. These pictures are a perfect visualisation of that sad scene in the poem. Ahdri, a 'golden' elf herself - maybe THE golden elf, creates a metaphor of a 'golden flower' ...for her friend who was taken by lightning and thunder...too fast...too cruel...an immortal in a mortal body she was, she (her body) could have NEVER survived. ___________________________________________________ Where flowers bloom, so does hope. - Lady Bird Johnson | |
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Posts : 1015 Join date : 2016-04-28 Age : 36 Location : Germany
| Subject: Re: ~ Poetry - "Worlds change when eyes meet" ~ Sun Jun 24, 2018 5:08 am | |
| When I am really sad, I like to lighten up my mood with lightness. With drawing a happy person, listening to a happy song, watching a funny comedian...
...reminded me of...PIKE.
In the theatre. Pike and Prayer. ________________
Prayer (in a tree costume): Let's lighten up the mood, shall we, Pike?
Pike (in a huge dreamberry costume): We shall...
Prayer: Alright...!
'Do dreamberries love him? Did he recognize them? Either way, We love them - and him!
Always jolly, he carries A bunch of good stories; Seize the way?'
Pike: 'Seize DANCE, WINE and DAY! ...Found a dreamberry bush...! Hooray!'
*he jumps in*
Me: 'There stood Pike, Now he is...away! You've just got to meet him Get carried away By his dreamseeking Dreamberry wing...
If you seek fun, you'll win, If you win, you'll have fun! Wait a moment... ...Life's just a game?'
Pike: 'Oh no, but my jokes - They have earned all the fame - That's the game! Don't you see? At your laughs I aim!'
Me: 'Hm...'
Pike: 'Was even a tiny berry myself Despite trolldung, it was my escape! Wasn't that genius, my friend? Hey wait, wait! Wasn't my dreamstories' end!'
Me: 'Eww....oh, Pike!'
*Laughing from the audience*
Me: 'One day he may grow old But his jokes are still gold; Maybe 'old' is not what it's been told, 'Cause he carries the spirit
Of a happy child, Yes, that's Pike! The one in the dreamberry bush, Full of joyful songs, fun and wild!
Yes, that's Pike! In the dreamberry bush? Always Pike!'
Pike: 'Always me!'
Prayer: 'Always Pike!
And now go to sleep, Kids, goodnight, Enough stories about good old...
young Pike.'
Pike: 'Wut?'
Me: 'Yes! Growing-old-but-ever-young Pike'
Pike: 'Ha! I guess that's right!'
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| | | PCoquelin
Posts : 1901 Join date : 2012-07-14 Age : 56 Location : St-Michel/Orge - France
| Subject: Re: ~ Poetry - "Worlds change when eyes meet" ~ Sun Jun 24, 2018 6:09 am | |
| Aaaah!... Pike... The most under-estimated character. Figure.. ..he cares! ___________________________________________________ | |
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Posts : 1015 Join date : 2016-04-28 Age : 36 Location : Germany
| Subject: Re: ~ Poetry - "Worlds change when eyes meet" ~ Mon Jun 25, 2018 6:54 am | |
| Thank you for Dreamberry Pike, PC! *giggles* ___________________________________________________ Where flowers bloom, so does hope. - Lady Bird Johnson | |
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| Subject: Re: ~ Poetry - "Worlds change when eyes meet" ~ Mon Jun 25, 2018 7:30 am | |
| Your Healing Love (Cutter's Song for Leetah) Leetah, I am here with you. For wherever you'll go, My spirit and love Will be with you, it's true. Just know I am free, Free and happy; My eyes see with joy Myself-Father-Tree. My spirit wings around you, You are warm and safe -- This loving, tender union Is our secret place. I want to keep on Being embraced By your warm, Deep, healing love! In the desert of my mind You're my one-of-a-kind Life-healer, Life-changer -- Ever flying, peaceful dove. Milk and honey Your hands, Oh, it knew the lands Of my body; sweet make-love! But my body left Abode's shore, Blood of Ten Chiefs Is roaring no more -- For this world said 'Enough'. You gave and give Me rest for my soul Which is not whole, What IS it made of? You give my soul-seeds water To flourish and grow; In the desert of my mind You heal dryness like Water from heaven above -- And your live-giving water Filled my branches and leaves Forever with your love. | |
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| Subject: Re: ~ Poetry - "Worlds change when eyes meet" ~ Mon Jun 25, 2018 8:19 am | |
| Suntop's Destiny No wolfblood in my veins But there flows magic, swirling, Like a dance! This magical feeling A teaser, a sting, I am still too small To bear fountain and spring. It tickles me often for sure, But my intentions are pure; I don't want to boast with myself, Yet instead help each and every elf. One day you will see -- I'll be what I'll be! And what's hidden inside me can Then, reveal who I really am. | |
| | | PCoquelin
Posts : 1901 Join date : 2012-07-14 Age : 56 Location : St-Michel/Orge - France
| Subject: Re: ~ Poetry - "Worlds change when eyes meet" ~ Mon Jun 25, 2018 9:32 am | |
| Awwww...
Let me thank you, Prayer, by integrating this poem to the thread dedicated to my favourite Elfquest character.
This way, this branch of the Father Tree will grow.. ..and many such branches would direly need to grow, by the way... ___________________________________________________ | |
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Posts : 1015 Join date : 2016-04-28 Age : 36 Location : Germany
| Subject: Re: ~ Poetry - "Worlds change when eyes meet" ~ Mon Jun 25, 2018 3:09 pm | |
| I thank you, too! Feeling honoured and appreciated.
You introduced this mild, wild child, the mystic so wonderfully in his thread. <3
About the branches in need of growth...I feel the same. So much hidden gems yet to explore in as much different ways and aspects as imaginable and the compassionate reader is willing to share... luckily, Father Tree is patient...like every soul of a tree. ___________________________________________________ Where flowers bloom, so does hope. - Lady Bird Johnson | |
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| Subject: Re: ~ Poetry - "Worlds change when eyes meet" ~ Fri Jun 29, 2018 8:28 am | |
| Winnowill Winnowill, Oh-Winnowill! Born to heal - Instead you kill. Already a spirit, Fury can't be stilled; For she tortures her prey Sadism - Her thrill! | |
| | | PCoquelin
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| Subject: Re: ~ Poetry - "Worlds change when eyes meet" ~ Fri Jun 29, 2018 3:50 pm | |
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| Subject: Re: ~ Poetry - "Worlds change when eyes meet" ~ Sat Jun 30, 2018 4:51 am | |
| Thank you so much, PC! It's perfect (like comic panels to read even). <3 Winnowill the black snake! Was so well drawn back at Blue Mountain times... ___________________________________________________ Where flowers bloom, so does hope. - Lady Bird Johnson | |
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| Subject: Re: ~ Poetry - "Worlds change when eyes meet" ~ Sun Jul 22, 2018 6:32 am | |
| Absence of light My Eyrn, your will was strong Like steel - Stronger than mine When you shielded me. My love, You had a heart Of gold; If only We could have grown old - And die like two old wolves. I need to hold your hand Again, My delicate moon flower Of the night. My life, My soulmate, My light In the darkness; Now it is All useless. High One, I may follow you through The ocean of endless stars - Yet my heart cries out: Why? There's no meaning for me In an illuminated sky. Why? There's no hope for a 'perfect' In an ocean of stars. Why? For there's just Empty, cold-black space - Just absence of light And scars. | |
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Posts : 1015 Join date : 2016-04-28 Age : 36 Location : Germany
| Subject: Re: ~ Poetry - "Worlds change when eyes meet" ~ Sun Jul 22, 2018 7:09 am | |
| Eternal Night Why do my feelings Of affection Have to be a sharp thorn? Why does it hurt me If I get too lost? Rather than the Palace embracing me I need the power To overcome loneliness. Even if I seem like a rose That's progressively growing petals, My very roots are already turning To dust. For I never spoke much in my life But only found true love In you. Can't I defy fate And live in the memory Of your violet eyes? I open my eyes again And will never find Such a love like yours. The World of Two Moons Lost it's true light Thus I'll vanish in space In a never-ending night. | |
| | | Embala
Posts : 16948 Join date : 2012-06-24 Age : 64 Location : Germany
| Subject: Re: ~ Poetry - "Worlds change when eyes meet" ~ Sun Jul 22, 2018 7:50 am | |
| Let me add this to your heartfelt sad poems, Fairyring. As an illustration, a variation ... a kind of comfort. Strongbow has lost family - his child and his lifemate - but he stayed himself and on the World of Two Moons. He has overcome sorrow and lives his life - but he'll never forget and sees his two moons whenever he wishes for. *hugs* ___________________________________________________ Indem du etwas tust, das dir oder jemand anderem gefällt, erschaffst du bereits einen Wert.
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| | | PCoquelin
Posts : 1901 Join date : 2012-07-14 Age : 56 Location : St-Michel/Orge - France
| Subject: Re: ~ Poetry - "Worlds change when eyes meet" ~ Sun Jul 22, 2018 9:24 am | |
| http://elfquest.com/read/index.php?s=DT&p=103 ___________________________________________________ | |
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| Subject: Re: ~ Poetry - "Worlds change when eyes meet" ~ Wed Jul 25, 2018 8:36 am | |
| Thank you, Embala! The collage...is so wonderful. Strongbow is my favourite male character. You captured his spirit SO WELL <3 Thank you again.
@PC: One of my favourite panels of dreamtime EVER. Thank you so much. I feel the power of that epic couple again. ___________________________________________________ Where flowers bloom, so does hope. - Lady Bird Johnson | |
| | | PCoquelin
Posts : 1901 Join date : 2012-07-14 Age : 56 Location : St-Michel/Orge - France
| Subject: Re: ~ Poetry - "Worlds change when eyes meet" ~ Wed Jul 25, 2018 1:54 pm | |
| - Prayer wrote:
- One of my favourite panels of dreamtime EVER.
Same here. The symbolic effect is great. And terribly sad. Unfortunately.. ..we understand it, now. ___________________________________________________ | |
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| Subject: Re: ~ Poetry - "Worlds change when eyes meet" ~ Fri Jul 27, 2018 3:21 am | |
| It was sad foreshadowing indeed.
I remember I was totally amazed by those panels without words. So emotionally drawn...<3. It created a very bittersweet, melancholic atmosphere back then. Still I never thought Elfmom would go that far to use this epic couple and their (regarding their closest bond of sharing their all through sending) unusual struggle to create a dramatic effect in the story. ___________________________________________________ Where flowers bloom, so does hope. - Lady Bird Johnson | |
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| Subject: Re: ~ Poetry - "Worlds change when eyes meet" ~ Tue Jul 09, 2019 5:33 pm | |
| Brill & Sunstream Her beauty is like A mysterious secret For she comes from The depths of the sea. A precious jewel not meant to be seen. His charme, from once being Tickling warmth of sunrays To becoming the streams of the sun Majestic and bright. Full of visionary light. Deep ocean, darkness, Bright sun, daylight Meant to be in love- Rising above everything Abode has ever seen. Giving birth to A true child of light Full of joy; able to touch the sky- Yes, even the hearts Of both men and elves. And the sun discovered The ocean's jewel And the jewel discovered Where it belongs and they both found The miracle of true, unexpected love. ___________________________________________________ Where flowers bloom, so does hope. - Lady Bird Johnson | |
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| Subject: Re: ~ Poetry - "Worlds change when eyes meet" ~ Wed Jul 10, 2019 4:01 am | |
| Nothing could keep him away.. ___________________________________________________ | |
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| Subject: Re: ~ Poetry - "Worlds change when eyes meet" ~ Wed Jul 10, 2019 4:55 am | |
| Aww thank you for adding this heartwarming scene, PC. This couple met in such a sweet but extraordinary way. ___________________________________________________ Where flowers bloom, so does hope. - Lady Bird Johnson | |
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| Subject: Re: ~ Poetry - "Worlds change when eyes meet" ~ Fri Jul 12, 2019 9:43 am | |
| SEAWAVES & SUN My Brill, when I hear the waves Of the ocean, I hear your voice Taste your salty skin. Oh Sunstream, when I feel sunrays On my skin I feel your embrace Warm like fire. Let us join... Soul meets soul When eyes meet eyes; Sweet is this time. The waves are our bed; The sunrays our candles; The seawind is our music And love is our song... | |
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| Subject: Re: ~ Poetry - "Worlds change when eyes meet" ~ Wed Jul 17, 2019 2:36 pm | |
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